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Old 05-02-04, 10:32 PM   #12
E Looch
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spiky you still need to fix your structure and stop stretchi nyour bars out and get some complexity to your flow actually get creative and try work on strong consistent punchs

terror decent verse you need to elevate your vocab and creativitie as well and work on stayin consistent i like how you didnt stray off on boastin yourself like most new people on this site got potential just work on wordplay

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