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Old 05-02-04, 10:35 PM   #11
accomplishment
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ok listen

Choppaa.. hotness good structre good use of vocab good punches gotta work on flow a little bit kinda sketchy in some parts...

yo skillz is shit--da only way u born 2 spit--unless u wuz re-incarnated.........
yo damn lyrics is dodo,i call yo verse fubu,cuz the spit is outdated.........
^^
Ya best line was ur opener and throughout ya verse it remained pretty steady but not exceding that..

K Born2spitt... :Not bad not as hard as choppas your punches werent as hard and you just randomly made up a word so you could rhyme it wit direah i think you mean Omnipetent ... but i dont know... anyways elevate

vote choppa city
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