i dont wanna fuck up dis lil nigga and get charged for underage shit//
and ya mom been round da block and nigga she got a undapayed clit//
and iam a make dis nigga like LOSTCHILD and make up a crew to vote for him//
this nigga is so pussy he gettin his home boiz to toke for him//
this lil kid is 13 ..but he runnin around actin like he big cheese//
and u spiky nigga and u aint commin out till 2k8..nigga pleaze//
and iam pettin a cat bcuz rounbd herre iam da kingping//
ayo ja iam mean spiky tel me waats da next "rap" song u gon' sing-in?//
u da battery right nigga but iam da bunny u see on ya t.v//
bang ya drums and shit..look in ya moms room..who da nigga u see?//
fuck u nigga tellin ppl vote for me vote for me..shut up motha fuckah//
wen i was fuckin ya mom i just should have slapped her..na i should have stuck her//
and dont get mad cuz u loosin to a nigga named da jokah//
dis yung nigga runnin round tellin his bois*ayo ayo im gonna poke her*//
fuckin bitch u probably jus gettin ya wet dreams//
aight here we go ..u da rookie iam da vet..QUEENZ//

decent verse but spiky look at his structure and try doin the same with your verse it makes it flow better and not looked so fucked up to where you gotta look an read your lines 4 times to find the punchs in the mjust elevate and REALLY REALLY work on your structure

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A Queer That Voted On my Battles Constently


^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here