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Old 05-03-04, 03:41 AM   #3
JPoll
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come on now...get some originality wit this...that no personal bullshit...prewritten like whoa!!!

whatever...here's some original shit...

check it lume, this is a lesson...

"Lume" ur about as witty as Joey on 'Friends',
U rhyme trends...like the show I'm puttin your rhymin to an end,
But unlike it...your career never begun,
Reading your generics is like watching Roseanne re-runs,
YUR WACK!...
You ain't a challenge...already merked...and i'm talking bout t.v.,
You like another bitch too, that blonde ho....you know phoebe,
She's retarded, ur halfminded...bringin a battle to me, ya rook,
Ur shits prewrit like Jin on 106...that ain't garner respect in my book,
You're murdered, now u 0 and 2, I'm callin you 'REDRUM',
If you were a movie...it'd be called "The village of the dumb",
My premise...you don't hit...but my words cause tremors,
The only way from not gettin ko'd is to jump off a cliff like you was a lemur...



that's a lesson in textstyle...don't prewrite that's weak shit...
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