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		But CJ gonna show U dat nigga that bring real lyrical destruction./ 
Try to act like you wear the pants, and say U run your click,/ 
D Peice the one runnin' thangs, U just a pussy-whipped bitch./ 
 
 
^^^ that does not flow well at all...i had to read it ova...and there's very little complexity in the disses 
 
 
Spittin' against me? i'll leave more holes on your face then a hockey mask/ 
Like donathan bailey I rip up "tracks" Jay finishin last like a nascar withno gas/ 
 
 
^^^^ better flow with at least an attempt at clever wordplay/punches 
 
 
FLow:  Killa 
RHyme:  Tie 
Punches:  Killa 
 
 
Vote: Killa 
		
	
		
		
		
		
		
	
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