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Old 05-03-04, 10:23 AM   #7
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But CJ gonna show U dat nigga that bring real lyrical destruction./
Try to act like you wear the pants, and say U run your click,/
D Peice the one runnin' thangs, U just a pussy-whipped bitch./


^^^ that does not flow well at all...i had to read it ova...and there's very little complexity in the disses


Spittin' against me? i'll leave more holes on your face then a hockey mask/
Like donathan bailey I rip up "tracks" Jay finishin last like a nascar withno gas/


^^^^ better flow with at least an attempt at clever wordplay/punches


FLow: Killa
RHyme: Tie
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