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Old 05-03-04, 11:29 AM   #6
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my words are told to the unknown, they will derange to change you/
theses raps are laps that colapse you faster than my crew stomps/

^^ ugh...awful rhyming here


um..

Mediocre emcees marvel at my magnificence
It's no co-incidence you're reduced to insignifcance

good, if not a bland opener


aiyo...i was pullin for fine mind because he had nice vocab and set-up

but, his rhyming hurt him big time...

Dawg...stick to true end rhyme...throw some internals in there


Vote: Pro...better flow and rhyming

Punches were about equal in this...decent, but could have been better on both parts