Hmm... how is your mind at peace, if you are frustrated, numbed, etc?

Anyway, this was ok, didn't do much for me because the structure was just sort of constnant throughout, and you didn't do that much with the topic, which seems a little cliche. A good start, for sure, but you probably want to work more on making it your own.. I just don't really sense much personal here.

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