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Old 05-03-04, 12:52 PM   #23
DeaDly RhymeZ 01
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yo bombshell did nice he had a pretty good amount of personls Punches but structure was a lil off but for da rest u did good

As for u REVEL u did bad ur flow is Exseptable but u dint RHYME so thats kinda bad you where useing kiddie Words BAM WAM!! thats some oldschool CARTOON shit

Break down:
Revel

opener:3/10
closer: 4/10
rhymes:5/10
flow: 6/10
Structure:3/10
21/50 u need to ELAVATE SOn

Break Down:

BOmbshellkilla

opener: 6/10
Closer:6/10
Rhymes: 7/10
FLow:8/10
Structure:4/10
31/50 u iight nIGGa


You HOMIES will get better u kno it lol iight 1

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