JPoll Ill make the lethal injection go in your direction,
You sound like you from the centre of mental correction,
Rhyme so fake your guilty of fraud and deception,
6...aight multi but overall weak punch!!
Ill kik you off your bridge like KRS did to Shan,
You aint even Muslim but u celebrate Ramadan,
Claimin that you fast but your jst a hungry man,
4...weak man, made-up personals never work!!
Spittin at me that could b counted as verbal suicide,
But i already killed you twice now thats double homicide,
5...too basic, sounds pre-written!!
Im wipin so many mc's out im commitin genicide,
Your gona b dead in 12 as if you swallowed cyanide,
5...aight multi again but that suicide, homicide, genocide shit has been done!!
J Poll jus bin added to my death toll,
Kik you cross the room whilst smokin weed 2 see how much J Roll!! (joint)
4...weak finisher!!

"Lume" ur about as witty as Joey on 'Friends',
U rhyme trends...like the show I'm puttin your rhymin to an end,
7...aight multi, not ure best but still gud!!
But unlike it...your career never begun,
Reading your generics is like watching Roseanne re-runs,
YUR WACK!...
6...funny shit, but still i've seen u do better!!
You ain't a challenge...already merked...and i'm talking bout t.v.,
You like another bitch too, that blonde ho....you know phoebe,
7...gud line, back to the Friends shit again!!
She's retarded, ur halfminded...bringin a battle to me, ya rook,
Ur shits prewrit like Jin on 106...that ain't garner respect in my book,
8...sick, best line so far!!
You're murdered, now u 0 and 2, I'm callin you 'REDRUM',
If you were a movie...it'd be called "The village of the dumb",
5...ure worst line, bleh!!
My premise...you don't hit...but my words cause tremors,
The only way from not gettin ko'd is to jump off a cliff like you was a lemur...
6...aight closer cud have been better!!

straight up
JPoll killed this battle and he didnt even try!!
overall better flow, and far better punches!
luminz u need to elevate a hella lot!!

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