JPoll Ill make the lethal injection go in your direction,
You sound like you from the centre of mental correction,
Aight opener.....Not that good
Rhyme so fake your guilty of fraud and deception,
Ill kik you off your bridge like KRS did to Shan,
O.K.....Not that hard...Work more on it
You aint even Muslim but u celebrate Ramadan,
Claimin that you fast but your jst a hungry man,
Weak....Very weak
Spittin at me that could b counted as verbal suicide,
But i already killed you twice now thats double homicide,
Weak again......
Im wipin so many mc's out im commitin genicide,
Your gona b dead in 12 as if you swallowed cyanide,
Best line so far...
J Poll jus bin added to my death toll,
Kik you cross the room whilst smokin weed 2 see how much J Roll!! (joint)
Ummmm...Noooo...not that good for a closiner
Nice structure....Nice complixety...Keep elevatin....2/5
"Lume" ur about as witty as Joey on 'Friends',
U rhyme trends...like the show I'm puttin your rhymin to an end,
Nice...In a way opener
But unlike it...your career never begun,
Reading your generics is like watching Roseanne re-runs,
LOL....Yea I hate the reruns too...Nice punch
YUR WACK!...
You ain't a challenge...already merked...and i'm talking bout t.v.,
You like another bitch too, that blonde ho....you know phoebe,
Weak in a way...
She's retarded, ur halfminded...bringin a battle to me, ya rook,
Ur shits prewrit like Jin on 106...that ain't garner respect in my book,
ummm lil but weak lil but not....
You're murdered, now u 0 and 2, I'm callin you 'REDRUM',
If you were a movie...it'd be called "The village of the dumb",
LOL sortof funny but kind of weak
My premise...you don't hit...but my words cause tremors,
The only way from not gettin ko'd is to jump off a cliff like you was a lemur...
Sortof weak closiner
Nice strcture and stuff....... 4/5
Can you return the favor please against born2spitt...Make a good explanation....Holla nice battle
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