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Old 05-03-04, 02:58 PM   #9
..ILL..
This is my first post!
 
IP:

u can't stop me, i rap second rate/
fuck wit me, i'll make ya shirt look like a bottle of V8/
ummm no not really feelin......
how can u stop dis kid, n his game of raps/
i'll make ya girl play wit my "basketballs" like its a game of taps/
LOL.....ummkay...
my bullets fitted for ya head, dats why i got da caps/
leave yo ass right where u stand for a long ass nap/
aight pretty nice........
yo, i get chu while u talkin' on ya cordless phone/
cut cha throat off, n leave u wit a cordless dome/
Best so far in ya battle......
i'ma rise to da top like foam, but i don't disenegrate/
i penetrate/ and i kno u tryna hate/
But
dats too late/
muh'fucka, u really jus decided ya fate/
OK....LOL your crackin me up...
i rap to da max/
n when i put somthin n ya ear it ain't gon' be a q-tip lookin for wax/
sit back n relax/ for i burn ya ass up like i got anthrax/
LOL....Nice I liked the Q tip but the rest wack....
i'm gon stay on da grind/
jus remember to keep dis nigga name n remind.
OK closiner...Needs better work
4/10 Work on punches man....

Dam this nigga cant be serious his wack flow is pre-written
You had time for perfection and his punches still aint hittin
Umm ok n a way
Dont come at me wit that I dont battle wanna be Mc’s
Who beat they meat wheneva they can and work at Mickie D’s
LOL..funny
but i give him credit he finally got a raise he’s up to $5.50
How u gone spit a pre-written verse and rhymes still be shitty
Alright but not that tight
Juss stick to fast food son...cuz wit your rhymes you wont get paid
He think maybe if he raps he’ll have a chance of gettin laid
Not that tight again
You betta watch ya prewritten shit before it gets u sprayed
Not a real rapper so he called MTV to get Made
ohhh......Murked him
“i wanna be famous,i wanna be a rapper” thats wut this bitch said
They told you no so be like ya moms and just stick to givin head
LOl...
Aight but thats enough im not goin to use ya moms to shine
He’ll get mad fuck around “stop making fun of me” and pull a Columbine
ummm....Dont really kno about this
But im tired of this bitch ass nigga wit his maybe beef
Your being tought a lesson...schools in session...so please take a seat
Nice closiner.....Really good clisner....I liked that....
8/10
Both sortof work on flows...exspecially ace...He just got murked..
V/You aint ready....Return the favor against born2spitt will ya....thanks its in font lines
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