dis was a pretty good battle.less break it down:
a$e
retty good,but i dont really find anything wrong with prewritting.you had some good flow,rhymes,it was tight.
best line:my bullets fitted for ya head, dats why i got da caps/
leave yo ass right where u stand for a long ass nap/
worst line:i'm gon stay on da grind/
jus remember to keep dis nigga name n remind.
overall:nice battle.good flow,6/10
you_aint_ready:nice battle,better dan da other,good flow,easy to read and know what rhymes with what
best line
am this nigga cant be serious his wack flow is pre-written
You had time for perfection and his punches still aint hittin
worst line:Aight but thats enough im not goin to use ya moms to shine
He’ll get mad fuck around “stop making fun of me” and pull a Columbine
overall:good battle 7/10
vote:you aint ready