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Old 05-03-04, 05:20 PM   #28
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Everything about u is wak
your styles worse than Rapbattles new banner
....chek his lyrics....
What's worste? check the sig, dawg work on ya grammer!
Nice personal...decent wordplay....good punch....8/10
11-0?....Peeped ya past, an I just don't see it....
Must be searchin for a loss....Callin me or Phinox
Decent punch...coulda gone places wit the set up line...6/10
100 times I seen this, newbies got your confidence going...
Undefeated n glowing....But now it's you I'm throwing....
Not all that great...6/10
1 L follows another, Lyrical....and Ima help start that trend....
The newbie thread's are over..there's no more room for make-pretend..
Gettin better....7/10
Mix ya face wit my fists....till I develop a crimson blend...
Wait till it clears up, Then reinforce my fist again....
Hot closer...9/10

Verse Score - 36/50

Aight your verse was pretty good....good wordplay....flow was straight....punches coulda been better in spots...closer was hot....pretty solid verse...good spit...

CarsonJetX2 a vergin rhymer I see his defeat colume amergin,
Hosts da mic clamin his wackness as i give him a verble merkin',
Decent opener....but u didnt land a great punch with that nice set up lin....6/10
Hes herble spittin' wacker than a Will Smith writen,
Killin' himself wid words weeker than a fake myth bitten',
Nice punch...8/10
Came wid punches unable to penatrate his onsluate scared to fight,
Your rhymes cheep,wid no complexity your weights just too light,
Still good...8/10
You host da mic but chokes wid gaps 'un' wholes in his vocab like Garth Gates,
You drop lines but wack is in mind wen i discover u use other peeps on ur mix tapes,
Stretched but it was good....7/10
He's potenchail Dick rydin' Mc wid rhyme weeker than day time tv,
My punches leavin' him speechless and only able to mime me.
haha nice closer...8/10

Verse Score - 37/50

wow this was close....flow was straight.....u had good punches....wordplay was good.....well rounded verse....but the punches took this battle....u had harder hitting punches....close though....very close....

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