20 Grand - Alright spit man, you had some good punches in there.. but you need to work on your flow.
Best Line - They call you 10tantive?//
Ill hold you captive//
cuz ur rhymes are defective//
Worst Line - you say u rape niggas?//
I should pull dat damn trigga//
Give u to the gravedigga//
10tative - Good punches in there man, with some good flow..
Best Line - slump back in ya seat kid, the army bout to get defeated/
I've made one line, and ya crew already retreated//
Worst Line - NONE
OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to 10tative for better punches and good flow, 20 grand your structure is off man and your rymes arnt that great.
VOTE - 10tative
RETURN THE FAV
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