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Old 05-03-04, 06:08 PM   #20
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if u so dope then y u make a callout yet affraid to spit first
prolly cos u gotta search for a bit verse so u can hit worse
Nice opener...8/10
silly rabbit your shit aint working cos there no trix in this game
your wack as fuck cos your lines bout as original as your name
hahaha....6/10
u shoulda just backed off i dunno y u even check inta my thread
cos u was fucked b4 it started like brittany when newly wed
hmm....5/10
bitch its best u shut your mouth n just dont get inta me
cos 9 months 4 u were born i gave your mom a dope dalivery
nice!!!.....10/10

Verse Score - 29/40

Wow you surprised me....u had a solid verse....good punches....jus werk on wordplay and using better meta's....u had a good flow......elevate and keep battlin....u got potential....

im fixin-ta-smack this kid thats clearly spittin-it-wack
I mean damn kid u "suck at rappin" hope ya stickin-ta-track(check his profile)
Decent personal but this is used a lot...6/10
I make-it-better plus this kids as fake-as-pleather
Bitch ass get "ripped up quicker" than a break-up-letter
hahaha nice meta....9/10
Beatin this joke of a hoax without puttin up any effort
Its like my lines givin "paper cuts" cuz damn my text hurts
decent....not that hard of a punch though....6/10
i aim-for-ya-throat with neck shots that make this lame-nigga-choke
Kid your not even "real" a fuckin fable-at-most
Not feelin this....2/10
mista-cool DOPE sent you straight from bitch-ta-fool
For real give up rappin homie and stick-to-school
basic punch...coulda closed harder...5/10

Verse Score - 28/50

Okay your verse was hot til the last two bars...u fell of....u need sustainment....that fucked u up and thats why u lost....but u got mad potential too kid....good punches....keepin elevatin....

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