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Old 05-03-04, 07:29 PM   #10
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Oh no man Get 911 this calls for an emrgency
He think he can win(lol)he needs brain surgury
Basic punch...simple...5/10
Cuz he's lost his mind hes obivously gone insane
He's drained/Wake up kid this anit no video game
Weak...3/10
Im sick/I'll pull a drive by while yo whole kin on the porch
After this u gotta change yo name to Unkown Corpse
Decent...7/10
Yo times is all most up don't u here da tick tock
U on Da Roc?/Oh well everyone needs a Mascot
haha...weak but funny...5/10
His rhymes r worn out and limp like they been materubated
It's a shameIt was fun merking u/cuz U just been assassinated
Weak...3/10

Verse Score - 23/50 = 46%

This verse was very weak...only one DECENT punch....u need to elevate on ya punches and worpdplay....use meta's and personals....elevate....

alright alright time to quit playin
shut the fuck up and listen 2 what im sayin
umm no punch...0/10
u a urban informant aka snitch ass trick
on ya block you known as "the dick lickin bitch"
very weak...2/10
u sick/ you goddamm right you sick
this easy imma get rid of you nice and quick
stop tellin wut ur gonna do....1/10
you gettin mad at me cause yo flows aint tight
ill beat yo ass in ol fashion street fight
again...what ur gonna do...wack...0/10
gettin all mad cause ya flows aint shit
im too good/you have no choise but too quit
gay...2/10
if i beat you right now then ill beat you again
you like chicago bulls you just wont win
no...0/10
you can come back all you want but youll just get smashed
be like ludacris and just BLOW IT OUT YA ASS
horrible...1/10

Verse Score - 6/70 = 9%

Aight this verse was horrible....u need to learn how to throw punches....go to tutorials and learn....cuz u need ALOT of work...

Vote - Da Solution for having a punch....
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