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lil chucky - aight that was really bad...understand its ya first time but heres ur breakdown...u didnt have ANY punches...use personals and meta's...go to tutorials and learn bout that stuff....stretched lines fucked up the flow....jus an overall newbie verse...u need wordplay too....better vocab is needed....jus elevate....
born - wow u had a very nice verse....u had a good flow....awesome meta's....good punches....decent wordplay....no personals....but u easily got this cuz u had punches and better rhymes....dont use these tho "//"....it fucks up the read....aight...
Vote - born2spit cuz he had the better verse!
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