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Old 05-03-04, 07:45 PM   #11
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ok 20 grand there was no complexity there at all... but if flowed good and you gotta work on punches... even though this is and inter crew battle... i mean your on the right track just elevate you know what i'm sayin

aight True Killa... Hot verse your opener was awful it made me want to fuckin shoot my self then sayin your opener was good in the next line made me cut my wrists... just kidden but that was pretty shitty... but after that you picked it up tellin him not to get mad at his pencil that one made me picture some goofy kid throwin his pencil at the wall so i laughed anyways you came more creativity so you take this one

vote true killah
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