ok check it

x factor good verse good structer good flow but it was more like a freestyle you even kind of dissed your self and it wasnt that complex just work on that shit for a while then you get alot better and with more complexity...

Yung Ceasar his verse was the same style but with more complexity..flow was kinda off in some places but work on that a lil bit and you could be a big head on this shit just stay somewhat active...

vote Yung Ceasar

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