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dawg - aight first off fix ya structure...than stop wit the simple rhymes...u need to throw hard punches and directly at him....use personals!!....use meta's too...they help ur punches land hard as fuck.....flow sucked too....go to tutorials and learn everything there....
toxic - your shit had better structure but dont use "//" cuz it is too newbieish....ur flow wasnt great cuz of long ass lines....but u threw punches!!....suggest u elevate in usin betta meta's....keep usin personals....elevate cuz u got potential....jus dont make ur lines so long....
vote - toxic
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