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Old 05-03-04, 08:20 PM   #21
FLooZe
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ok heres the review:

FLOW INTELLIGENT:in my mind,your shit was rocking,you had a solid verse,barely any flaws,flow was good,so was everything else.
best line:im complex..more wordplay than confusion in his text//
i'll let loose and use boots to leave contusions on ya chest//
worst line: N/A
overall:6/10.above average

NEVADAT: not too bad,good flow,but some of your stuff barely rhymed,unless you have a special pronunciacion for them,which you might,but i couldnt rhyme some lines such as:your sexual Choice is havin sex wit ya boys/
Givin neck in the royce wit the tech to his groin/
see what i mean?
best line:this was a toughie considering nothing rhymed but i found this which was average and OK.
Serve him somthing sick Leave him cocked in the bed/
Give him a black jacket where zipper stop at ya head/
worst line:Thank god imma crook ...imma problem sho'/
Drop bombs On flow Like saddam And Bush/
this obviously doesnt rhyme.whered you get dis from?
overall:4/10.crap

VOTE: Flow Intelligent
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