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Old 05-03-04, 08:41 PM   #62
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ok good verses from both people...ill u had a couple flaws which were...your lack of structure...some lines are short and the 2nd line is triple the length...makes it a harder read...your punches were good hard hitting and i think better than borns...and personals ill merked born...born u didnt really say anything personal about him...but ill was using personals and punches flow and wordplay in the same bars which made it more complex but an interesting read...born u had perfect structure and flow and strong punches and wordplay...

best bar in battle:

my flows 'disasterous', and you cant 'handle this'//
nigga, fuck this 'rappin shit', i'll strap ya back wit explosive 'packages'//

worst bar in battle:

this is probably one of the most played lines ever just u reworded it

bitch why am I wastin my time on you or even bother//
You couldn't drop knowledge even if Einstein was your father//

vote: ill...i think the personals won this battle for him and personals always hit harder than punches...born u had some good shyt too but not good enough to win this battle..i think u had a couple played punches but other than that and lack of personals u got madd skill...a remtach would be good

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