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Old 05-03-04, 09:35 PM   #11
Triple_N
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Not a good battle....Both y'all had weak punches an need to elevate
ILL....you had weak punches, no personals, no multies, no wordplay, basic vocab, bad opener, horrible closer, no creativity, decent flow, good structure

Dis....you had weak punches too, but some were hit ok, good use of multies was your strong point, basic vocab, no personals, no wordplay, weak opener, ok closer, a little creativity, decent flow, structure was messed up though
Breakdown:
Flow: Ill
Structure: Ill
Punches: Dis
Personals: Tie
Opener: Dis
Closer: Dis
Wordplay: Tie
Creativity: Dis
Multies: Dis
Vote: Dis
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