ha yo rhymes limited edition did you get em off eminem?lol.anyways that shit was wack.i aint hatin votin,im just sayin,you gotta improve."ARE YOU A FUCKING MORON!? HOW COULD I PUT THIS IN MY NEWSPAPER!?"

Sorry ladies and hookers...pictureperfect is a duderaper...
that was apretty wack line.no offence but the two dont go together.if you had made a better first line,then maybe it wouldve made sense.but for now,it sucked.you gotta make everything of yours better,flow,your structure wasnt bad but the rest was.punchlines were ok.

PP2

you merked dis kid.no question about it.

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