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Old 05-04-04, 01:55 AM   #18
Afterword
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the winner is daclassic for an over-all more impressive drop
the punches, ryhme scheme, vocab, and damn near every aspect was superior here
my fav line=closer
"I'll place you on an escalator, Just to get you some elevation
So here is your eviction notice, think of a relocation"

authentik it was not horrible, but it was horrible by comparison
just use more creativity, like multies, or metas, and harder punches

peace
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