ugh...where do I begin...

Disas...

#1...STOP TYPING IN CAPTIAL LETTERS! IT'S SHOUTING AND IT HURTS PEOPLE'S EYES!
You Preachin To The Converted Cause We All Believe Your Wack
All You Do I Fuckin Yack Like You Spent All Nite Smokin Crack

^^^..much of your spit is filled with lines like these = filler and uninspired..not even funny or hard hitting


#2..Your vocab was good. But, you threw in personals I had no idea the meaning of. If you do that, then, I don't fully get the punch.


Killa

#1..
better flow than disas...but-

m the "mail man" like Karl Malone 'cause im deliverin losses to this hoe/
This Bitch Can't rap.. Im like the mississippii river 'cause I alwayz flow/

^^^^...Don't talk about yourself so much in your opener. This is a diss. Where's the punch at him?



Rip "disaster" into "pieces".. aint no x-man but verse is a fuckin "beast"/
This gurls rhymes still aint holy and she just gave head to the priest/

^^^ pretty coo there...coulda been set-up better

um

FLow: Killa
RHymes: Tie
Structure: Killa
Punches: Killa


Vote: Killa