tony....u had sum decent punches and a couple hot hard hittin ones....fix ya structre....dont use //....too newbieish....flow was aight....work on wordplay too....jus elevate cuz ull get betta....
collab....now u had alot of weak punches....elevate there....flow wasnt that great....use personals and meta's.....go to tutorials and learn how to do ish....

Vote - tony for the more elevated verse

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