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Old 05-04-04, 04:11 PM   #6
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khemistry - aight u had a sick flow....but the punches....only a couple were okay.....u jus said wut u are able to do....gotta elevate there by using personals and meta's....wordplay was decent....elevate....
lil chi - alright first off fix ya structure....that shit is hard to read....flow sucks....use a better rhyme scheme....get wordplay....u had no alright punches....everything was weak....go to tutorials and learn a few things....

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