ok, lets see...
FlOw InTeLLiGeNt, ya flowed really well, and ya had a few stabs that were more witty than hard hittin. Actually, I'll take that back, nearly all of ya stabs were witty and some incorporated wordplay, but the truth is, the punches were weak. You need to maintain the clever wordplay and witty stabs, while adding a little more bite, the kinda disses that make crowds go 'ohh!!!' killer lines are the order of the day man, you got intelligence and flows, that is the last thing you need to work on before ya really tear shit up.

GKillaz05, just like FlOw InTeLLiGeNt, ya had clever stabs, but not as clever as him. A lot of ya shit was filler, saying he moves slow like a slug is an excuse for a rhyming word, try changing it to 'point ma barrell in ya mouth and force feed ya slugs', as in shotgun slugs. I know when ya freestylin or got small time limits, ya cant really go back and improve shit, so just try to think of the harder shit while ya still typing. You also had pretty weak punches, but quite a bit stronger than FlOw InTeLLiGeNt, such as the sleeping pill line. ya flow was slightly worse, but still pretty smooth.

GKillaz05 gets my vote, his flow was worse but he just squeaked through with the harder stabs.

Peace, if ya got a problem with my vote, PM me