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Old 05-04-04, 04:50 PM   #10
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profinik - aight ur verse was horrible...u had stretched lines....nothing made sense....no punches....horrible flow....bad wordplay......go to tutorials.....

toxic - u need ta fix ya structure....its too hard to read....but u actually threw punches....but seriously dont use that structure....but u win cuz u had punches...

vote - toxic
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