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Old 05-04-04, 05:52 PM   #13
PoLiFicK
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From: bedrock
IP:

nice drops both of u came strong

born 2 spitt-nice punches and creativity on yo flow 2 make it hott

bestline-IP: B2D8 6E11


You can’t stomach these rhymes reading them alone is suicide..
Stepped on like broken eggs shells, food for thought, so do u want ya’ brains scrambled or fried?..

nice start

worstelin-nun

nice drops

valor-also nice punches where it hurts and nice vocab

bestline-than dont ever battle a person with ur experience....
and i think rb's tutorial room has a dope 10 line verse for sale on clearance...

another nice start

worsteline-lookin real wack with a simple record of 6-2....
im sick,ur rymes are fixed,and im pooring hard personel licks on you.....

not as sick

also your verse wasnt long so disavantage

born-

punches-9/10
flow-9/10
structure-8.6/10
personals-9/10
conistant verse-10/10
vocab-9.6/10
close-9/10
overall-9.3/10

valor

punches-9/10
flow-9/10
structure-9/10
personals-8.6/10
conistant verse-9.7/10
vocab-9.5/10
close-9/10
overall-9/10

winner -born
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