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Old 05-04-04, 07:09 PM   #30
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terror - aight good meta's!!...but werk on usin personals cuz they hit really hard....but u had good punches in here.....nice flow....wordplay was good....keep elevatin....got potential...
sun - ok u had basic rhymes and punches....use meta's and personals.....flow was ok.....wordplay was fine....but it was too basic....elevate on vocab and punches....use personals....go to tutorials n learn that ish....

vote - terror
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