Thread: Revell vs Ill
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Old 05-04-04, 07:16 PM   #18
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revell - that was bad....really bad....u had no punches....no personals....no metas....no flow....horrible wordplay.....bad verse....go to tutorials and learn everything in there if u wanna elevate....

ill - aight urs wasnt great either....u had a couple bad punches while he had none....ur flow was off in spots.....don tstretch ya lines so long....use personals.....and betta meta's....i thought i heard u use that texas chainsaw line in anotha one of ur battles...i dunno i forget....but u win cuz u threw a couple bad punches....

vote - ill for havin attempts at punches.....
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