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Old 05-04-04, 07:55 PM   #13
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aight this looks like a good battle so ima do bar by bar....

I know you 'gon search for some ill lines, try to reconstructe 'em,/
But CJ gonna show U dat nigga that bring real lyrical destruction./
No real hard punch....6/10
Try to act like you wear the pants, and say U run your click,/
D Peice the one runnin' thangs, U just a pussy-whipped bitch./
Hard punch!!...9/10
So let me free, better than you and I'm sayin' "Not Another One,/
Another "gangsta" rapper, I'm just like damn, not another Gun./
Decent personal...alright punch....7/10
Fam, how much you know about guns? I bet you got a glock,/
U stick your dick in the barrel, so you can say you got it "cocked"./
Hahaha.....8/10
It's a shame, you rappers all the same, & I'm changin' the game,/
Your style is lame, only place you get an extra W is in your name./
Hot personal....nice closer....9/10

Verse Score - 39/50 = 78%

Good spit...opener wasnt the best ive seen but ur verse was pretty steady on flow and punches.....nice overall spit....good wordplay....i liked your meta's.....closer was really hot....

Cut you up N throw ya bodyparts in a breifcase..Let me explain this brief case/
Jay sucks dick fo a livin and his bars're as soft as a meltin fuckin cheese-cake/
seems forced...not that hard of a punch neway...5/10
I spit real shit no optical illusion..Pump air in this bitch like the ball "infusion"/
You cant win like LA vs Houston I could be the LA clippers and i still aint losin/
No good punch still...5/10
Spittin' against me? i'll leave more holes on your face then a hockey mask/
Like donathan bailey I rip up "tracks" Jay finishin last like a nascar withno gas/
I like this punch and meta....8/10
cause earthqakes noones feelin you like a fat man fuckin an aner-exic chick/
Blast my heata make this bitch my personal seanuorita but i aint mex-i-can/
Wack....3/10
Dont spit,your bars are ugly...Your lyrics are "busted" they far from a dime/
Even if IT hrew this kid in a pool of glitter ...this bitch still couldn't shine/
Decent meta and punch...7/10

Verse Score - 28/50 = 56%

Wow i was expecting more from you....you only had two good punches...very weak.....u just talked basically.....didnt get the job done and that hy you lost....

Vote - CountreeJay
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