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Old 05-04-04, 08:40 PM   #3
LaTiNKiTTeN
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A Master When U Fuckin Gag Dicks u Hick, Whole Lot Of Spit Ignoring Chicks,
Cause Tits And Pussy Make You Fucking Sick, (LoL)

girl..the dick/chick/sick rhyme scheme is very played..not to mention basic.........i didnt think that punch hit anywhere

It Dawned On Me When You Said You Went To Check Your Boy,
People, Telling RB How You're Marvelously Self Employed,

i think u're tryna imply he's a fag.......but.......its really weak

Lying About Your Life, I Realized Know You're A Coy,
Confused Lost Fag Your Rhymes Only Self Destroyed,

um...no punch

Your Cover-Ups Don't Front You Exposed YourSelf,
I Can See Why You Act Hard And Big Up Your Wealth,

nothin in those
From The Male Clients Who Like To Bone Without Paying,
You Let Them Know You Get The Dough First Or Bullets Are Spraying,

hmmm...no comment
You Unconsciously Admitted That You Love The Same Sex,
Ill Break It Down For Your A$$ (Figure Of Speech Fag Boy) It Isn't That Complex,
nothin again
I Dont Even Have To Think To Dismantle Your Silly Rhymes,
You Sound Sissy Like 'Will Smith', Its 'Big-Willy-Time',
not a good reference at all....will smith references..are a NO

Shit Is Over With:
Hit You With The Truth, You Wished You Never Wrote Back,
You Fuckin Whack Crack Head Rapper You Already Got Bitch Slapped,!!!
nothing mindblowing

ok dp.....the problem is....u have no punches......n ur style is to write a story...n u decided to write a story about him goin to check his boy,so u pinned it on him that he's a fag.......n thats what the whole verse was about........not feelin it........u need punches...punches win battles......i've seen better from u



I’ll sketch my lines on your thoughts and tattoo your mind
Miracally possessed, I’ll lyrically depress your rhymes.
flowed ok,nothin hard hittin in there
DP is too busy touching her clit then thinking about writing raps
Her rhymes is cool, but she just another bitch in my lap.
weak
I’m taking names while this gurl waiting in line to get ripped
The only tongue twisting this gurl does is when she massaging some dick.
lol prolly ur best line
My rage will ignite and burn and leave holes in pages,
And fill more “steel” in words than birds in cages.
well..u were lookin for somethign that rhymed more than for something that would've made a good punch....that was a weak meta
This gurl’s boldness got me phenning and filling my cravenness,
While I’m spiting “2nds” and “3rds” got me filling her “cravenness.”
i dont think craveness is a word.........
I’ll blaze her easily like I should, she just another Girl Gone Wild (Mug shots)
She be a veteran in rap, but she just a newb to my style.
not hard hitting
You fine but this is a man’s world, so I advise you to stick to the girly .
My lines will slice till it looks like her period came a week too early.
lol kinda funny
“Scramble” my sentences till my wordplay turns your brain to “eggs”
Verbally Splitting Ya Dome, Till It Looks Like Whats Between Ya Legs.
ok nothin spectacular


well.......gdouce took it........ur verse wasnt the greatest but u beat dp.....dp didnt come hard at alll...thats all i can say.......
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