you better hold your teeth in your mouth cause my flows are so good they drop jawz/
i leave people in awwww/
yo thats way to stretch man u need to even it out somewhat ya know format is everything woulda been decent if you previewed and made some simple adjustments
collab ....i thought you took it to em more personal and punch better flowed a lil nicer tho still a bit choppy just work on em and keep strivin its why we here good luck to both of ya in future
Big ups to honest votes........
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