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Old 05-04-04, 10:26 PM   #14
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wow ive seen better out of u metaphysic alot better
overall 8/10
i kno u could do much better than that
openerBoot Rit in the head like I kick knowledge to this wack cat..1
.....After he spit.....I said what he said..2
Quote:
Originally Posted by M.F.P
wat kind of weak rap was that...... 3
that was wack with bad structure sorry man but thats what i think aight
ok heres my breakdown for the middle
ok i give you a 7/10 on this
Told Ritish he can eat my words....so he grabbed a spoon..4
Only time you get the upper hand..is when its 12 o'clock noon..5
Damn Rit, ya verse couldnt touchdown if ya fingered a clit..6
End ya life quick.. like minute men fucking on first dates..7
Ill state, you the facts with glue like im sealing your fate..8
Im whipping and sipping this pussys clit in from spitten..9
I bet you didnt understand that like stepping on prewrittens..10
ok closer it was good 8/10
Damn kitten, you suck please consider quitting, ya entertainer..11
Metallic holdin ya teeth like fill-ins and retainers..12
My gat will leave you dusted like cremation in containers..13
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ok mfp
this is the best ive seen you do lol only batle i ever seen you in though
opener your was better then metaphysics
it was still a lil wack
7/10
better than his
middle he got u on that
6.9 outa ten
closer tie
overall 8.3 outa ten maybe it was just luck im not sure
but my vote goes to mfp
sorry metaphysic
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