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Old 05-04-04, 11:31 PM   #16
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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tony
Flow:1/10 usin the same word 2 make shit rhyme is herbish work on ur flow
vocabulary:4/10 nothin really good bawsic wrok on it
punches:4/10 ok didnt hit very hard and was played
creativity:2/10 like i said above played work on it
opener:2/10 gay didnt flow and didnt hit
closer:5/10 pretty good but played
overall:18/60
work on all i stated then ull b better u need mad elevation

Supreme:
Flow:8/10 flow was really good
vocabulary:5/10 needs work but had more complex words than tony
punches:6/10 i feel ur punches hit pretty hard
creativity:7/10 u actually came pretty creative good job
opener:5/10 2nd line was good but didnt really like the 1
closer:3/10 wasnt feelin it was kinda played
u could work on ur vocab and structure a lil ur flow was good good verse overall
overall:34/60
u get my vote u had better everything except 4 ur closer
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