to be honest wit yall,dis wasnt a very good battle.but imma do the review anyways
DISASTERPIECE
k do be honest,your verse wasnt very good.you used alot of ''big''vocabulary but the end result was shit.im not hatin votin,im just saying.you had some ok flow,but i almost fell asleep durin it.
best line:You Can't Think Of More Than You Said The First-Time,
So Like DisasterPeice Said Go Back And Just Reverse Your-Rhymes,
this was the best line in your verse.ok diss,but.......w/e not that great.
worst line:You Immitate Art When You Write After Me,
You Just A Work In Progress But I'm A True Da-Vinchi,
now,this is a complete lie.j/k.its actually not bad,but i dont like it at all.
overall:4/10.pretty crappy.you gotta work on makin some stuff better.wordplay mostly.
TONYSELF:you had the upper hand on this without a doubt.i didnt like your structure very much,because of the ....s everywhere,but your disses were pretty good.
best line:Behind my zipper feenin for it So im maken ya squeal....
and suckin dick shit, that still wont get you a deal..
that isnt very strong,but it works.
worst line:Stick a microphone up ya ass So i can hear ya shit..
....just shit streaks
The form of your lines when your startin to spit...
... your spits weak ...
this line makes me want to cry.why the hell is it so dumb.anyways i cant do nuthin bout it now.
overall:6/10. good.work on your structure alot more,thatll help you.
VOTE: TONYSELF