the breakdown

first spiky

i'm spitn my ryhmes try'n to not waste no time
with little pet't shit caus u fin to get yo ass kicked/
come on u could of rap da first time but this time
i'm i'm finm to fuck up yo mined/4
this aint dream my shit gone make want to scream
caus i aint blow out no steam/3
i'm da king of this rap game i'm not ashamed if i
win or lose caus u losen yo cool/
yo rap ainr as serious as mine caus your sound more
like sister sister try tobe some fuckn hookers/
come on man u know u fin to win so i'm gonna ask
for a wishh from Genie La Jin/
u probably sayn my raps are and there really rhyming/
yo rap see like butter knife but i cant even rap on
this fuckn site/
i'm only 13years old on this mic still riding with training
wheels on my bike/
so i'm fin to leave this site to write rap caus i'm still
tryn to pick out the naps/

seriously you need to learn something original...please go to teaching forum... keep it elevatin ya heard...
5/10

now for wrecker

y waste time spittin against this romper room emcee/
wen his rhymes are like the kids mr jackson prefers.....ELEMENTREE!!!/
8 haah
u should have heeded yo momma warnin im nothin to play wit//
u culd elevate yo shitty rhymes an still be in the basement//
6 played
so just face it you basic//
yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces//
5 played and bad flow
you wouldnt have a winning hand if u was ambidextorous//
my corrosive flow eat throrgh ya face, with the mic i preech my message//
7 decent
yo flow just trash no way it is a diamond in the rough//
you could *SPIT* 99 bars and that dumb shit still not could b enough//
7
use yo middle school english to upgrade yo rap gramnmer//
caz readin yo rhymes, u sound like an emcee wit a stammer//
7
yo battle verse just wasted time off my life//
if u was tryin to cut me w/ ya punches u used the blunt end of the knife//
7
imma give u an option the next ime u face wrecker//

good battle

vote mic wrecker