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Old 05-05-04, 07:16 AM   #6
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hm, killa poizen craps and shit talks all over the shop, hmph. who can say 'freepost'?

ok luminaz, ya had the usual violent lines, but some lines were just plain shitty or stupid. instead of saying watching his corpse is boring so youll watch paint dry, say some shit about how ya gonna piss on his coffin at the funeral or somethin. stab at every opportunity, so he full of holes. The only things goin for ya were it rhymed, and you used some comparison. Other than that, standard, shitty played out lines that e have all read before. Make at least one personal diss, like make a diss involving his name, with it being specific to his name. Lacklustre spit.

Dark, ya stabs werent exactly strong either, and the only real thing i felt was the aids/lookin for a cure thing. however, just like lukinaz, it rhymes, flow was ok, and you didnt have as much pointless filler as lumi did. As for the hole violent shit, you both said it, its still playeds, but you had more aggression and violence in yours so you come out top there. While not good, you pretty much outdone luminaz.

my vote goes to dark

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