Born2spitt you chose to battle me I thats your dicision.....
You think you was born2spitt..Bitch you was born to fix my television....

^^^^ decent opener...but, it could've been worded better

hes a homo,O yea yall didnt know he takes it up the butt....
He wants pussy so bad he stay up at 3'o clock (am) watching BET uncut...

^^^ how can he be both a homo and want pussy? don't get it...!!?!!

I dont know what bars is I think you mean 10 lines but I think im doin fine..
But since you said 10 bars I helped you and ended it with a 20th line....

^^^ closer was not strong man...

1...work on your line length...the flow is off from too many damn syllables...if you're gonna do that, then increase internal rhyming by 75%...


um...
Hold your head high nigga, lean backwards and relax//
don't let me shock you, paramedics in casualty'll do that//

^^..that's hot...not funny...not that hard hitting...but slick...decent opener

You a Dominican in America repping a Canadian crew//
this kid makin me boil up, this boy is just a flamboyant fuck//


^^^ nice personal...but, it coulda hit harder...i was waiting for the knockout blow with the set-up...but, youi didn't deliver it

You couldn't drop knowledge even if Einstein was your father//
and i see why u dont do topicals...u write verses so poorly//
That a drama still wouldn't be good even wit a "twist" in the story//

^^^^ decent closer...better than I'lls...but, not quite the knockout punch I thought you would bring...


Flow: Born
Rhymes: Born
Punches: Born



Vote: Born