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Old 05-05-04, 10:57 AM   #15
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for spiky2k8:

flow:no off spots it worked pretty well not too complex either though 6/10

volcab:basic not much to say you didn't really seem to put much effort here 5/10

punches:not much some open disses nothing really personal and your best lines were at the end and they made fun of you more then anything saying your still using training wheels?? ha ha ha good job at putting yourself down try next week to direct that shit at your oppenent 4/10

overall:15/30 i've seen worse atleast

breakdown for mic_wrecker:

flowff on some of them lines that were alittle long but overall good jbo 6/10

volcab:better then spiky but still room to improve 6/10

punches:you had some direct punches which spiky didn't so hands down against him you win. but for furture refrence most of your lines were played and you should try to get some original ones best line,"yo rhymes are like a folded hand in poker nigga....and im 4 aces//" 6/10

overall:18/30 alright verse good to see you showing up this time

vote--mic wrecker
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league