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Old 05-05-04, 11:04 AM   #15
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for king solo:

flow:kinda choppy in some of the bars, they were long lines and not much for internal rhyming to help them 6/10

volcab:good use better then average i guess 6/10

punches:mainly played topics nothing too special my fav,"And nice avatar……I just got one question, what the fuck is ure mom spankin" probably the most played outta the entire verse but it had me laughing 6/10

overall:18/30 well rounded verse pretty good job

breakdown for deadly vision:

flow:kinda choppy liked you were punching in everybar 6/10

volcab:good job way above your oppenent here 8/10

punches:nice lines here a couple seemed alittle played i've read shit like them before but you did good at putting your own angle on them and you got real personal too my fav,"Nicky Fletcher..haha You've got less chance of 'giving birth'-to-rap then a 13 year old virgins period.." good job 8/10

overall:22/30 good job you surprised me with this verse

vote--deadly vision
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