IP: A8B9 6596


king solo u aint my enemy,
ima toast to that one, sippin on dat hensi,
half des clowns say they dont remember me,
ima flow lighty so u can get a script of me,

^^ wtf...that's not a diss to him...that's a compliment...basically sayin you're glad he's not ur enemy

but u got to figure how my shit spits out,
i dont wait 15 min for my rhymes to shout,
homie i bust back, wit 4 gats, i stay strapped,
i play like dat


^^^ ot good at all...the structure of this was bad...you had no direction to your flow or hardly any punches


um...

U can’t even afford to rent sum skillz, so stick to them fuckin bagpipes
Zippin by in my Benz CLK waving a fuckin torched Scottish flag by
I’m the CEO of this shit, take a lift to my office cuz that’s how u elevatin
My brain don’t understand wack shit, so I’ll get sun jian to do the translatin

^^^ nice flow...good rhyming... the San Jian line was the best part of this

Ure a genetic freak, don’t u know ure ass was born in a fuckin test tube
Shit, I’m done slaughtering u, leave what’s left for the fuckin next newb!!

^^ Closer really doesn't make sense..."the next newb" is basically calling YOURSELF a newb...

also...what the HELL was the point in spelling out his name if there wasn't a message behind it...it's been done before and is basically pointless

UZI...work on structure and flow

King...good verse...if anything, work on better wordplay


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