GrOwN aSs MaN
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u call me out? guess ill be takin the newb's challenge//
nexion ill slice ya melon up like im makin a fruit salad//
^^ hahaha...the funniest thing about that line was the "newb's challenge" part
good 1
this bitch comes wit weak flows. condoms? i'll need those//
cuz this battle is like a dream come true: me and a cheap hoe//
^^ is nexion a female? if so..the line is OKAY...if not..it's eh...might have worked better had you said "easy" instead of cheap...decent
ya got bitch raps, and they will be wrecked soon//
cause your "full of shit" son, like "public restrooms"//
^^^ decent closer
U shouldnt have accepted b/c ur Flow is Far from [Intelligent]
Your punches might as well be slaps ur Shits [Irrelivent]
^^ 1st line was good, like it was setting up something. UNfortunately, the 2nd line didn't come through...eh line
But ur still gonna Come down like the 9/11 [Towers]<R.I.P
Your ~Flow~ is softer then Play ~Doe~ u flat out [Blow]
^^ THIS WAS AWFUL DAWG. DO NOT EVER USE A REFERENCE LIKE THIS FOR THE PURPOSE OF A CHEAP BATTLE, THEN HAVE THE AUDACITY TO SAY R.I.P.
NO NO NO NO
Maybe you can find a n00b that u can Actually [Beat]
You Just "Got served Suckah" so sit down,shut up, and Take a [Seat]
good attempt at a strong finish...you just needed a more complex punch with wordplay to pull this verse off
Vote: FLow...better punches/wordplay/complexity
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