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Old 05-05-04, 12:15 PM   #9
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u call me out? guess ill be takin the newb's challenge//
nexion ill slice ya melon up like im makin a fruit salad//

^^ hahaha...the funniest thing about that line was the "newb's challenge" part

good 1

this bitch comes wit weak flows. condoms? i'll need those//
cuz this battle is like a dream come true: me and a cheap hoe//

^^ is nexion a female? if so..the line is OKAY...if not..it's eh...might have worked better had you said "easy" instead of cheap...decent



ya got bitch raps, and they will be wrecked soon//
cause your "full of shit" son, like "public restrooms"//

^^^ decent closer

U shouldnt have accepted b/c ur Flow is Far from [Intelligent]
Your punches might as well be slaps ur Shits [Irrelivent]

^^ 1st line was good, like it was setting up something. UNfortunately, the 2nd line didn't come through...eh line

But ur still gonna Come down like the 9/11 [Towers]<R.I.P
Your ~Flow~ is softer then Play ~Doe~ u flat out [Blow]

^^ THIS WAS AWFUL DAWG. DO NOT EVER USE A REFERENCE LIKE THIS FOR THE PURPOSE OF A CHEAP BATTLE, THEN HAVE THE AUDACITY TO SAY R.I.P.

NO NO NO NO

Maybe you can find a n00b that u can Actually [Beat]
You Just "Got served Suckah" so sit down,shut up, and Take a [Seat]

good attempt at a strong finish...you just needed a more complex punch with wordplay to pull this verse off


Vote: FLow...better punches/wordplay/complexity


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