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Old 05-05-04, 12:39 PM   #11
hydroponic_buzz
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x factor - for a first battle that was pretty tight. You where gettin' digs into yourself at the start which dropped ya' a couple of marks, but flow an' structure where good.
fav line -
"ill tear open your chest and choke you wit your own arteries//"
nice an' aggressive!

caeser - also pretty tight, i wasn't feelin' some of yu're punches but it flowed well.
"I cut your face and say your blood like the orange juice dog cuz i leave you pulpy//"
what the f*ck was that all about?

i have to give this one to x-factor he had some nicer punches and i think his flow was better, good battle...
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