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Old 05-05-04, 01:58 PM   #6
King Solo
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fine mind
what was with ure lines.
no disrespect but they were wack.
u flow was off in places and u seriously lacked on structure. ure punches were weak, the only line that had any force behind it was the opening line. after that it was all bleh!! ure lines hardly rhymed and u had no creativity in there, it was all just basic.
u need to get creative, beef up ure punchlines, use more personals, throw in a couple of multis u know. check ure opponents previous battles and profile for ammo to use.

n sight
wasnt ure best, rather basic i think.
ure flow was on i was feelin ure verse and shit. ure structure was on again, usin that basic square shit...always gud!! gotta say, punches came weak but they did have connection. u had little creativity if that, ure punches were all basic shit but still better than fines. i say the same to u......beef up ure punchlines, personals and punches are what win battles, show some creativity and use better wordplay, that'll get victories most of the time.

Overall weak battle, not top spits from either of you.
V/ - N Sight cuz he came harder than fine mind.
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