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Old 05-05-04, 02:07 PM   #21
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STiLL Da FUKKiN SiCKEST!!
 
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From: NyC,Da HOMe OF Da TWiN TOWER'S!
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do u fools listen da music or u skimp thru it...nobody know how da vote no more

opener-D...pp2 ya shit was corny
structure-D..pp2 look at ya 3rd line dat shit was longess line i seen lol
punchlines-D...he merked u
wordplay-D..
multis-D
flow-D..how da fukk could accomplish flow pp2 lines and dem shits took up da whole page
personal's-pp2..u got dis dunn datz about it tho
enjoyed-D..dis nigga verse was madd creative and he had some hott punches like da last line...pp2 ya shit ws good 2 but ya lines be havin like a 100 words in dem i dont know how u flow 2 a beat like dat fix that then you'll be good

my vote-D

return da favor da link is my sig..and dont give me a hate vote cuzz i vote 4 u
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